You got some rymes, I'll give you that
but your bitch ass lyrics are smelling like scat.
Come on now punks, put yo tracks down
it's the slams that are key and you gots not to clown.
Get off of your fat asses, I'm sure EQ had helped that
and start the dissin and jabbin with the smack in the hat.
Ya, the smack in the hat, he will get your ass high
like a dragon in eq with neg resists as da spells fly.
You can hack and slash all you want in the game,
but if you gona come out betta not be lame!
-Lane
This is kinda fun. :) Of fuck.. Cheese!
A pointless thread
What the fuck was that shit?
Can't you count your beats?
Got a job? then don't quit,
cause your rhymes are fuckin weak.
Here's a tip from your icon
to make your shit sound straight
if line A has six syllables
line B needs less then eight.
Can't just throw it in whenever,
cause your rhyme comes way too late.
If your rhymes are really fiesty,
but the beat is off by one,
the shit will still flow nicely
without ruining all the fun.
Now you know the flow,
the way rhymin sposed to go
cause I'd rather see you get it straight
then watch your lines just grow.
Next time just don't step,
don't bring it to the master,
free tips are done now prep,
further tries will be disaster.
---
that second to last one sounded more like a limerick then a freestyle. I need to stop busting these out at 5:30am...
EDIT: almost forgot: CHEESE!
- Icon
Can't you count your beats?
Got a job? then don't quit,
cause your rhymes are fuckin weak.
Here's a tip from your icon
to make your shit sound straight
if line A has six syllables
line B needs less then eight.
Can't just throw it in whenever,
cause your rhyme comes way too late.
If your rhymes are really fiesty,
but the beat is off by one,
the shit will still flow nicely
without ruining all the fun.
Now you know the flow,
the way rhymin sposed to go
cause I'd rather see you get it straight
then watch your lines just grow.
Next time just don't step,
don't bring it to the master,
free tips are done now prep,
further tries will be disaster.
---
that second to last one sounded more like a limerick then a freestyle. I need to stop busting these out at 5:30am...
EDIT: almost forgot: CHEESE!
- Icon
In memory of [b][color=darkblue]MasTerKeyZ[/b][/color].
Dude. All you asiagos that aren't bumping CHEESE.. need to go to another thread.
This is for CHEESE only. It'd be gudda of you to find another thread to post-whore in. Leave it to those of us who can munster the courage to post about cheese and keeping the valancey of this thread in proportion.
This is for CHEESE only. It'd be gudda of you to find another thread to post-whore in. Leave it to those of us who can munster the courage to post about cheese and keeping the valancey of this thread in proportion.
-Elric
The power of cheese
Just cause you think that you are Gouda doesn't mean that you stinky Swiss fuckers need to cut me down for being American... 
Man without religion is like a fish without a bicycle
=P
The culture in here stinks,
Swiss logic is full of holes.
I know that most do think,
That gouda tastes good on rolls.
You can trim off the parts,
That grow fuzzy with green mold.
It’s still good at the heart,
Yes its worth its weight in gold.
Cheese!
Swiss logic is full of holes.
I know that most do think,
That gouda tastes good on rolls.
You can trim off the parts,
That grow fuzzy with green mold.
It’s still good at the heart,
Yes its worth its weight in gold.
Cheese!
Man without religion is like a fish without a bicycle